Response to Critique 

I think that overall my critique went very well. I got good advice for the issues regarding saturation and concept. I believe my concept was well received and captured by the audience which I was a tad nervous about. I'm glad it wasn't too obvious but the class had a good grasp on the idea. From the critique I discovered that it might be a good idea to lower the saturation if I was going to print this out for a show or to hang on the wall because it might change from screen to paper. The class also brought up the question of balance (part of my concept) and how there were more figures on the bottom left then on the bottom right. We discussed about the difference in odd and even numbers regarding graphic arts and fine art. I think this is something useful to hold onto because it can change the way the viewer views your piece. If they are distracted by the balanced or unbalanced composition then this can make them not like the piece. Another suggestion that I might take into consideration, if I were to do this again, is to add more arms of the cranes to play off the concept of me having multiple arms. All in all, I really appreciated everyone's constructive criticisms and will try to employ those suggestions in future projects.